“Take the Parkside Path.” That’s the tagline I wrote…
…for Parkside Financial Bank & Trust, Clayton, Missouri. To its credit, this industry-leading bank now uses the “path” metaphor in all its messaging, and its URL is even http://ParksidePath.com. Here are a few images from the website, demonstrating how a rich, expressive tagline can be carried out. And on.
Need a tagline with this kind of messaging power? Call me. 314-479-1966. Need a great bank? Take the Parkside Path.
“Wedding Vows.” TV commercial for CEFCU Credit Union.
I wrote “Wedding Vows” for agency Maring Weissman and its client, CEFCU Credit Union. In it, a young couple gets suitably emotional about car loans, while an incredulous uncle can’t quite believe what he’s hearing. Director: Mike Sneeden. Production: Arbor Group.
TV Script: CEFCU “Wedding Vows”
A 20something bride and groom at altar exchanging vows in front of a crowd of guests.
BRIDE (so sincerely): Brad, I knew you were the guy for me when you said we should get our car loan from CEFCU.
In the pews, a funny uncle furrows his brow in confusion: did the bride really say that? Yes, she did, and she continues.
BRIDE: You said CEFCU had the best deals, the best rates, and you were right. You said we could trust CEFCU the most, and you were right. I said, “this is the guy for me,” and I was right!
The bride and groom share a look of pure love. A bridesmaid chokes up with emotion. But in the pews, the funny uncle, unmoved, leans over to his wife.
FUNNY UNCLE (a little too loud): They should never let them write their own vows.
WIFE: Shhhh!
The funny uncle, reprimanded, slinks in the pew sheepishly.